04-19-2007, 03:46 AM
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~Loving Devotion~
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Chicago baby~
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You are right...the story is exposed and there isn't mystery involved, but that is because the author (me) didn't do it that way. Obviously it was intented to be open, since the charater is overwelmed. I thank you once again for expressing your opinion and I await for your response on that challenge I told you about 
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Originally Posted by Jowy
When Janny sees something she wants, she isn't subtle. She grabs it, viciously.
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