06-07-2007, 12:01 AM
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~Loving Devotion~
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Chicago baby~
Posts: 759
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Ah, my dearest fellow writer. How I’ve missed thy poetic words. Makes my heart warm and I smile with a kind glee to see thy gentle soul once again. Words can’t express my inner excitement but I must push that aside for now to read you once again, just like the good old days.
*takes a deep breath*
I can see improvement and I love how you express yourself so eloquently on this piece. Definitely the rhyming makes a better effect as well. As always, I enjoy your writings and I am soooo glad you posted this. I wish to see more of your works and damn…I just realized I haven’t posted anything for a while either =O
*goes & looks for one & updates my thread too* lol =P
Oh btw, you know that there is poetry contest about to start 
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Originally Posted by Jowy
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