Honestly, to review this piece from a normal readers view i would have to say that this impulse to find connections to this piece manifests itself withint me more than ever towards this glorious prose you wrote my dear. I see it as some of your most powerfull work as it has bite and an edge that cant be missed once consumed by its message. no metaphor as such but descriptive words to pass the emotions as so felt by the writter, and strong they are as i read into, it proclaims itsself.
from a personal perspective i fell in love with this prose as soon as i layed eyes on it and it ever more impresses me as time goes by and its meaning gets stronger, its time gets nearer<3
this one is one of your strongest even with a change of medium from traditional poetry format you keep it full of art and your talent realy shines through in this.
turely feeling your passion for writting through this is an understatment.
your message burns the ears of all that bid to read it, and is proclimation is what ties this one up as a whole^_^ as always an inner struggle is fought from the opening and resovled by the ending which i always love about your writtings mi amor.
i always wonder your secrets, and how you are able to pour so much gracefullness into your words...
i cant review or become a critic on this unfortunaly...due to the fact that i fell for this one from the start and i would be to biast to try point out anything to work on....theres nothing. its perfection that make it such a beautiful piece of art and as always my dear diosa, thankyou for sharring your thoughts and inner feelings through your writtings with me and others.....i know that your art urged many analasysis in my mind to come to a conclusion on life, i think by others reading your experiences through this form it will help also....thats why i truely believe that to publish your writtings would bring much joy and light to what darkness resides in this world as darky even said that they draw him in, i know many feel the same by you....your love for life is powerfull.<3
te amo.thankyou.
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