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Originally Posted by eXo
Y'know, I do like it, but there's definitely a point to which complicated words should be used, and ( not meaning any offense ) I think you're over it. I once attended a public speech lecture where the woman told us never to use a word like "ubiquitous" when "everywhere" will do. Your piece will lose a lot of its effect if the reader has to stumble over words; smaller ones allow for a pause in the reading of a piece so someone can comprehend it.
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Yes and no. I didn't go over it, as it all seems to flow for those that actually read this type of stuff :P I was close, but I made sure that there were supporting sentences to enhance and confirm previous.
Thanks for the feedback
