Character Compilation

[Stryfe]

-Note: Most of these seem over-powered. Nevertheless, they all have very easy weaknesses. I just trust that whoever or whatever I am facing will actually be able to comprehend that. =D

Let's start off with my newest character. He's unfinished, but....

(I added his weakness for you =D)

Name: Ath Isidorus – pronounced “Ahth E-c-dor-is”
Age: 437, but appears 22.
Gender: Male
Species: Fallen Human
Appearance:

Ath’s appearance is not normal underneath his clothing and armor. For his skin is something unique. Composed entirely of Necroplasm, his skin is actually burned fleshed, molting off. As it decays, it regenerates, and the process continues over and over. Each time the flesh decaying happens, pain is felt through Ath’s body. It is as though Ath is being tormented. The only part that is not burned is his face, where the Necroplasm only goes from the neck down. From his neck up, Ath looks completely normal.

His face skin is a tan color. His face has a boyish charm and smile, yet a fierce and stern look when battling. Having silver eyes with a black pupil, he looks possessed. Yet, when looking long enough, one can see a tormented soul being held there; his soul. His lips are a faint pink and are always noticeable. Above his eyes are his whitish eyebrows that arch downwards to his nose. Above that is his milky white hair that exceeds past his left eye. The right side is always tucked to the side, but they both tend to shift once in awhile. It is an interesting look, yet is hardly beneficial.

Atop his layer of skin is a skin tight black suit. It reaches from the neck down to the wrists, then to the ankles. Every once in a while it seems to pulse and feed off the decaying flesh. On his hands and feet at this level are simple gloves and foot gear. His gloves are like driving gloves where his boots are more like socks, but give support at the bottom. Each is a silver tint.

The next layer of clothing above Ath is his general armor and gear. Attached to his main body is a loose fitting cloth, much like a tunic. This cloth is the finest known and can’t be torn apart. For, if it does rip, it will repair itself. It can, as well, withstand many things like normal armor and it is light, giving Ath an advantage. He, in turn, covered himself with this material.

The cloth is pure white, and extends from his shoulder blades to his waist. It never goes onto his arms or legs. On his legs instead is another loose fitting item, covering each leg. Yet, these leg clothing are held tight to the legs by straps that are wrapped around each leg separately. In a crisscrossed fashion, then end when they tuck into themselves. On his waist that connects the two is a sash that is too long and flails in the air behind him. At the end of each piece of thread is a metal blade, however.

His arms have the same bands, but instead are wrapped to his forearms and hands, covering each. His feet are covered by a boot that has “Devil Wings” on the heels of them. Much like the God of Hermes, Ath made his boots different.

All this armor, one attached to Ath, can’t be removed. It was a curse that was laid upon, for when something touches the black skin tight layer, it becomes apart of Ath. Therefore, he covered himself up with what he deemed fitting. He, in turn, can’t absorb anymore to his body.

Weapon(s):

“Necroplasm - a will-controlled substance featured in the fictional Spawn universe. It was originally indistinct / synonymous with psychoplasm, the substance of which Hell itself is composed. It is similar in properties, but special in that it can exist on Earth without needing to remain in one of Hell's spheres of influence as well as being allowed to traverse the mortal world without violating the non-aggression pact between Heaven and Hell.”

Above is a basic description of what his actual ‘weapon’his. For, Ath doesn’t actually wield a weapon. He is made of necroplasm, giving him super strength and durability. While he still has internal organs, they are non-functional, and their damage/destruction does not hinder. In turn, Ath is his own weapon and somewhat indestructible. Yet, there’s something strange that comes with this; His skin-tight armor.

This armor feeds off of Ath’s dying necroplasm. In turn, it is its mind of its own. It is a symbiotic relationship between the two. The suit, whatever it touches, can control and help protect Ath. So, when Ath’s clothing touches the suit, it can be manipulated and act as a defensive weapon or an offensive weapon. This also allows for a transformation of sorts.

Although he may seem immortal, there are ways to end this. The way to hinder Ath is that of a “dead zone” effect. Or the place where no hellish being can enter, due to it is owned by heaven. This place is located on every planet and is unknown to the human eye. This area may be large or small, depending on the place or planet. Once Ath is in the area, he loses his abilities. However, he has to be in this area for it to be lost and there are no exceptions. Heaven he can’t enter, or be transported to due to him not being allowed. He’ll hit a barrier and return where he once stood. The other option to end Ath is decapitation by a holy weapon not tainted by an evil hand.

Martial Arts:

Singultus: Meaning “Death”, this technique is the most basic and yet complex move Ath knows. It involves many kicks and punches, and is very hard to master. However, once you have, you will laugh at how easy you see it when you use it. Basically, the style picks multiple points at once on the body and uses fast blows to attack them. While the opponent is focusing on this, an unknown kick may occur to knock the opponent off his feet. Upon doing this, chances are the place where the kick was done is where the opponent has a shatter bone.

Terminus Est: Meaning “This is the End”, the technique is a more well rounded fighting style. It incorporates more speed than strength and also relies on the enemy’s errors in order to be great counter-style. It involves many kicks instead of punches, but it seems to have an effect to throw off the opponent. Combined with the inexpugnabilis style it is a devastating technique.

Inexpugnabilis: Meaning “Unconquerable”, this technique is almost exactly like the Terminus Est style. The only two differences between to the two styles are that the Inexpungnabilis style is used with the hands rather than the legs AND it incorporates a stronger force. It relies more of a finishing move than a technique, but if used in a sequence it is a dangerous adversary. It basically shatters the bone upon contact using vital points in the bone. To counter it from shattering (Not using shields, armor, or barriers), the opponent must somehow dampen the blow or dodge it completely. The second part is highly unlikely since the opponent will be unbalanced when the style is used.

Personality:

Originally hateful and deceitful, Ath was out for blood. Yet, when his victory upon those who created him happened, he had an epiphany. His could, blackened soul changed and soon he was carefree, just going with the wind. Loving to listen to others and always cherishing those he holds close, Ath soon became his own man. Not someone that was controlled. He did, however, lack the power to be decisive. In turn, others views were in him. He was easily manipulated, but not like before.

Biography:

-Later

Theme Song: “And the Hero will Drown” – Story of the Year

[Akira Avelon]

So far it's alright. But I think it might need a bit more weaknesses.. Other than a certain area or place where he has no power / can't enter or decapitation.

[Stryfe]

Originally Posted by Akira Avelon

So far it's alright. But I think it might need a bit more weaknesses.. Other than a certain area or place where he has no power / can't enter or decapitation.

There is, but I rather list the ones that is harder to view. XD. The others will be revealed through RP battles. ;D.

And yes, it is not my "superb" writing due to me creating it about 45 minutes ago. By tomorrow night it should be nearly completed and updated here. =D.

[Rise Against]

.. Omg, weaknesses. Good job. It turned out a little different than I thought it would, to be honest. I have a few ideas of your weaknesses though. =D

Put in a biography, foo.