Sunshine's Poetry

Sunshine · 02-02-2007, 06:40 PM

Clone of Hercules
I am a real man,
I live in a tin can,
I cook with a pan,
Yeah I'm a real man.

Doctor Nurse
The difference is big,
And it isn't the wig,
The nurse isn't a pig,
But the difference is big.

Oh Baby
Oh baby, get on your knees,
Oh baby, start sucking my peas.

Oh baby, tell your mum to be more alert,
Oh baby, next time I won't tell her I'm about to squirt.

Oh baby, play your cards by the dozen,
Oh baby, secretly I'm ****ing your cousin.

Oh baby, I must leave you and let you think,
Oh baby, your arse is firm, round and pink.

------

I don't care what you care; I'm a ****ing genius.

Jak · 02-02-2007, 06:43 PM

I'm a poet
I'm a poet
And I dinn't know it.

Sunshine · 02-02-2007, 06:44 PM

You're my idol.

Naked Gackt · 02-02-2007, 07:24 PM

I liked the first one, but the others didn't really connect with my feelings emotionally oin the way I would have liked them to

Sunshine · 02-02-2007, 07:51 PM

That hurts, man.

Naked Gackt · 02-02-2007, 07:52 PM

Write ****ing better poetry then. Hercules in New York ftw.

Sunshine · 02-02-2007, 07:56 PM

No. It hurts that you like one of them.

Naked Gackt · 02-02-2007, 07:58 PM

proof

02-02-2007, 06:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
Sunshine Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: St. Helens Age: 19 Posts: 168 Rep Power: 4	Sunshine's Poetry Clone of Hercules I am a real man, I live in a tin can, I cook with a pan, Yeah I'm a real man. Doctor Nurse The difference is big, And it isn't the wig, The nurse isn't a pig, But the difference is big. Oh Baby Oh baby, get on your knees, Oh baby, start sucking my peas. Oh baby, tell your mum to be more alert, Oh baby, next time I won't tell her I'm about to squirt. Oh baby, play your cards by the dozen, Oh baby, secretly I'm **ing your cousin. Oh baby, I must leave you and let you think, Oh baby, your arse is firm, round and pink. ------ I don't care what you care; I'm a **ing genius.

02-02-2007, 06:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
Jak KING OF THE INTERNETS Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Liverpool Age: 17 Posts: 2,363 Rep Power: 8	I'm a poet I'm a poet And I dinn't know it. __________________

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02-02-2007, 06:44 PM	#3 (permalink)
Sunshine Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: St. Helens Age: 19 Posts: 168 Rep Power: 4	You're my idol.

02-02-2007, 07:24 PM	#4 (permalink)
Naked Gackt Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: England Age: 21 Posts: 645 Rep Power: 5	I liked the first one, but the others didn't really connect with my feelings emotionally oin the way I would have liked them to

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Sunshine Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: St. Helens Age: 19 Posts: 168 Rep Power: 4	That hurts, man.

02-02-2007, 07:52 PM	#6 (permalink)
Naked Gackt Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: England Age: 21 Posts: 645 Rep Power: 5	Write ****ing better poetry then. Hercules in New York ftw.

02-02-2007, 07:56 PM	#7 (permalink)
Sunshine Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: St. Helens Age: 19 Posts: 168 Rep Power: 4	No. It hurts that you like one of them.

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Naked Gackt Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: England Age: 21 Posts: 645 Rep Power: 5	proof