As the bird flew through the nights air there was a cold harsh wind opposing him, fighting its way into the birds small lungs to pierce it with a cold taint. Breaking into a dive the air thrust itself as if in a blocking stance trying to hold the bird airborne failing miserably as the bird broke through its invisible barriers.
Landing slightly ruffled and perching it self on a withered statue the bird absorbed its surroundings with precision and extreme curiosity. It was around this time that the statue came in to focus, the statue was a large robed figure carrying a sort of stick, it was made of cold stone and seemed to look like it once had a soul but which was now gone with the wind.
Peering up the bird could see a long bleak road with large monstrous walls on either side and little huts set up between them both. The walls were recently fortified and given defence towers every mile. This is due to the growing threat of attacks from the E.B.U. This town was simply one long road with a fortified wall on either side, used for barrier purposes between the two connecting states. So therefore if an attack was made the inhabitants would be the ones to loose their homes. But these inhabitants cared not for there dismal existence as they governed themselves and cared only about money. And if you cared for money and nothing more then this was a town to live in.
Boarder Town Watch is famous for being a corrupt slum with massive death rates. The land here is some of the cheapest in the world and has the only place where taxes do not exist; but you run the risk of seeing the next day.
Walking down Boarder Town Watch a shadowy figure hummed to himself taking in all his surroundings; his eyes focusing specifically on the bodies just asleep on the floor and the poorly created huts. He was holding a letter that rustled as it stroked past his robe in the wind, the letter had been sent to him one week previously and stated “something he wanted could be found at Gurnys Pubfoot on The first night of Yew.”
Turning left he came face to face with the biggest building or shack seen so far. Without noticing previously he had know realised that the road had opened into a sort of roundabout shape with a large statue in the middle. Peering back down to his crumpled letter he breathed deeply so that when the air escaped his mouth the outside air gave a shy scream in greeting.
The shack had a rusty metal sign saying “Urnys PbfUt.” It was common knowledge for places to be misspelt in the town and the man wasn’t at all surprised when reading this. The shack or building sounded like there was more people in this building then the rest of the town with the sound of gruff shouting voices and chairs screaming as they are dragged violently across the hard course floor.
As he opened the door and walked in he was sure the noise had made a local bird fly from its nest on the statue nearby…
Ok its not the best opening but I just wanted to give it an opening. The bird has no relevance by the way.
Ok well this story is going to be governed to a certain extent. I want people to be creative and free with there ideas but I want there characters to go with the theme.
So ill give you backing information and if you want to join you can give me a link to the biography you have created.
I must say I have a general idea of how the story will probably go but I don’t mind what happens as long as it is in the theme of the world I am creating. I don’t want someone firing an Uzi for example.
I will need to approve yours biographies and I only want 4 people. I think 5 of us should be enough so if you apply I want long detailed posts and I want them at least every 2 days. If for some reason you are unable to post for a certain time pm me and we can make an adjustment in the story to why you can not post.
Backing Information
:The most confusing bit of this original world is the days.
In a planet of many different racial backgrounds a struggle for peace is once again underway with the tides of war and undercurrent of evil wavering it. This undercurrent being the new Brotherhood Party; lead by a corrupt ex militant with a warped vision and extreme views. The largest superpower the planet had ever seen “Edeaniun” was this way due to its huge immigrant system, homing Humans, Elves, Corea, Kerkan’s and other minor races. This multi racial backbone has shaped this huge country into the superpower it is today led by a government with a member of each race but with the dominant leading party in power consisting of mainly Hume’s and High Elves. Though this has usually suited everyone there neglect for the run down areas of their country and the passive stance they have taken to the newly rising threat of Kerkan terror attacks; where many Kerkan’s from run down areas are following an extremist faith and sacrificing themselves to rise huge dragons and behemoth demons, has now taken its toll and the people want more. A group calling themselves The Brotherhood soon took to the challenge and won over the support of the people telling the people they would do what the government wouldn’t and kill those known of preaching hatred before carnage was struck. The attacks soon died down and The brotherhood led by Arc Major “Validus Necronic” became a public hero and a Government enemy, they new if the people did not that he was no hero and if given the chance would destroy the democracy they worked so hard to create. After gaining power in its first state The Brotherhood renamed the state V.N after there leader. Soon other states were voting more towards The Brotherhood until they were soon sharing power over most states with Harmony and has 4 states completely under there power. It was then when The Brotherhood were shown in a light of truth showing there true motives. On Tindas of The 8000th Windfall they invaded Eden and killed the leading members of the Eden Boarder Unit for there alliance with Kerkan’s.
Obviously at this Harmony struck out for the first time stating arrest would be made and soon Harmony once again had the majority vote. However, The Dark Brotherhood never ever showed its members, there faces covered by a white balaclava and there bodies covered in there uniforms. They once reasoned this was so people could lead normal lives while still maintaining an active role in the Purification of Kerkan’s. Now it is known it is was so they couldn’t be linked to the atrocities that would soon follow there rise to power.
But there presence still lingers on as they are still a huge shadow party and with the fresh threat of terror attacks from the Kerkan’s home country dictator how long will it be before people once more rally to Arc Major Validus Necronic.
“The Brotherhood” backing information
During the purification the Dark Brotherhood would leave a red cross on the doors of those killed to show that the country was one enemy less/; therefore safer.
Validus Necronic is actually a Corea. And born on Crest Odin of the 7984th Yew.
Validus name Arc Major is from his rank in the Brotherhood and when he was in the army. An Arc is like a lord.
Valdius is latin for strong and powerful.
They wore Black Silk Army outfits with white balaclavas and berets.
Background information in general
The Crests (days) of the week are:
Moon
Tindas
Odin
Thor
(each day lasts 30 hours)
The seasons are:
Windfall
Red Sky
Yew
Vision Bright
CrestShort
(Each season contains 20 weeks except Yew which contains ten and they are complete darkness.)
Minor Races are races of semi intellect.
One of these is the Centaurs which ruled the planet long before any other race until a disease now named The Centaur curse turned them all mentally insane. However researchers believe that the Centaurs after realising of this killer disease named it The Yew Effect, further research shows that they believe this curse was strongly related to the 400th Yew.
It is told through out High teachings that the day and season you were born shows your personality and future.
The faith called “High” is the most common in Edeaniun. It is also the most politically powerful, most famous by Harmony the Largest political party of Edeaniun having its entire top ranked members as High Elves and High Hume’s and its member list is genuinely made of followers.
To have the title High before your race for example High Hume Ulster Miller (Arch-Minister of Harmony) means you are very highly ranked in the Faith of Highs teachings and are a highly valued soul in Gods eyes.
POLITICAL INFOMATION
The EBU has full power of one state in Edeaniun but also has its own country named Renamed Eden. This independent country is a sandy wasteland filled small little villages and markets.
The EBU consists of just Hume’s.
The EBU isn’t a Political Party but a movement, currently there aims are unsure but they have sided with Kerkan’s allowing many to immigrate to there state.
The EBU is currently in close talks with the Krakan Homeland JaVan. Helping them in there battle against the WoodElves on the Polka Boarder. This has also caused a huge riff between Edeaniuns as the EBU have attacked the guardposts set up on the boarder to stop the two sides fighting.
The time that opening was based on was the 8005th Yew Crest Moon.
The date of your birth is a very important thing as well though that will be talked about once the story is going.
ok well if you managed to read through all of that and dont mind making a character to suit and want to be in this and can post in detail then link me your bio before anyone else. If that is people join and i hope they do.
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