Name: Brick
Age: 14
Class:Ninja
Weapons: 2 Short swords and 1 long sword plus a bow and arrow.
Armor: A cloak that can blend into any background and can protect it's wearer from all sword's.(Unless legendary.) The cloak is called "Rugitama" Which in his clan means "Scowling wind."
Clan: Dark hunters.
Appearance: Blue eyes Blond hair 3 earings and a normal body
Background: His parent's were killed by dark hunters and to make up for it the Dark Hunters(Different ones.) Took him in.
Strengths: Fire, Animals, and a quick wit.
Weaknesses: Seeing loved ones together. also he sucks at pottery, building, fighting ones who used to be his friend's, and making people understand him.
Costume:A black vest with cut's in various part's of it, Pant's with 3 holes in them, and a huge cloak covering his long sword which is hidden under his jacket
Natable facts: He has 3 scars on his right knee and has a burn mark to the left of his nose.
Feelings: He is usually happy because his master (Yar) favors him over all the other studentbut he is usually sad when other people treat him as a outcast because of the 1 dimensional stereotype attached to the Dark Hunters
Friends: All his first friends are unknown but one of his new friends is jack a 29 year old man who was recently drafted into a war

Not enough information... What is his appearance, his background, Weaknesses and strengths? Sorry, Not approved until more information is added. Please read the Bio writing help guides and look at other people's bios to see what you need for this to be approved.

Now is it good
I EDited ot.

Could you please approve me I did some new stuff to my character.

I didn't know you had to be approved before you got into a fight cause I kinda tryed to get myself into one I'm really really really really sorry.

posts merged FGJ! and I'm not an RP mod but I don't think that's what Aki was talking about when she mentioned Weaknesses.

You need more detail. Just one liners about things isn't enough for another person to go by. Sorry. I still can't approve this.

Yeah, and what Rob said...

Ok I edited it out more.
(Could you please tell me a list of catagories that I should make for my character???)

If that's not enough then I will work on it tomorrow (Our in the course of a couple week's.)

by weaknesses, I think she means combat weaknesses. Not personal issues.

Please read this thread. Kirby fo shizzle It outlines what we're looking for in a bio. You need more information on your character. Not just new things to add. Give a detailed background. As I said before, Look at other Bios. Like Mista Rob, Auron, Shakan'Dar, eXo or myself. They are well approved and if you want to go even further. read Travnia's bio. It's extremely complex and detailed.

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