To ALL: Get Your Complimentary Ringtones
 
  Welcome, Guest!
Register Today!
  Go Back   Final Fantasy Forums
 

 
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 03-23-2007, 06:33 PM   #1 (permalink)

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)

Junior Member

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)'s Avatar

Posts: 16
Rep: 10
Age: 12
Sex:
Location: Traverse Town
Join Date: Mar 2007

Default Sora V.S. Naruto's characters.

Name: Brick
Age: 14
Class:Ninja
Weapons: 2 Short swords and 1 long sword plus a bow and arrow.
Armor: A cloak that can blend into any background and can protect it's wearer from all sword's.(Unless legendary.) The cloak is called "Rugitama" Which in his clan means "Scowling wind."
Clan: Dark hunters.
Appearance: Blue eyes Blond hair 3 earings and a normal body
Background: His parent's were killed by dark hunters and to make up for it the Dark Hunters(Different ones.) Took him in.
Strengths: Fire, Animals, and a quick wit.
Weaknesses: Seeing loved ones together. also he sucks at pottery, building, fighting ones who used to be his friend's, and making people understand him.
Costume:A black vest with cut's in various part's of it, Pant's with 3 holes in them, and a huge cloak covering his long sword which is hidden under his jacket
Natable facts: He has 3 scars on his right knee and has a burn mark to the left of his nose.
Feelings: He is usually happy because his master (Yar) favors him over all the other studentbut he is usually sad when other people treat him as a outcast because of the 1 dimensional stereotype attached to the Dark Hunters
Friends: All his first friends are unknown but one of his new friends is jack a 29 year old man who was recently drafted into a war



Top of Page
 
Old 03-23-2007, 06:44 PM   #2 (permalink)

Akira Avelon

Thy life for a dream

Akira Avelon's Avatar

Posts: 690
Rep: 12
Sex:
Location:
Join Date: Feb 2007

Default

Not enough information... What is his appearance, his background, Weaknesses and strengths? Sorry, Not approved until more information is added. Please read the Bio writing help guides and look at other people's bios to see what you need for this to be approved.



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 07:19 PM   #3 (permalink)

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)

Junior Member

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)'s Avatar

Posts: 16
Rep: 10
Age: 12
Sex:
Location: Traverse Town
Join Date: Mar 2007

Default

Now is it good
I EDited ot.

Could you please approve me I did some new stuff to my character.

I didn't know you had to be approved before you got into a fight cause I kinda tryed to get myself into one I'm really really really really sorry.



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 07:27 PM   #4 (permalink)

The Dude

I <3 Jak

The Dude's Avatar

Posts: 2,418
Rep: 10
Age: 21
Sex:
Location: Scranton. Where the Office is filmed
Join Date: Jan 2007

Send a message via MSN to The Dude
Default

posts merged FGJ! and I'm not an RP mod but I don't think that's what Aki was talking about when she mentioned Weaknesses.



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 07:28 PM   #5 (permalink)

Akira Avelon

Thy life for a dream

Akira Avelon's Avatar

Posts: 690
Rep: 12
Sex:
Location:
Join Date: Feb 2007

Default

You need more detail. Just one liners about things isn't enough for another person to go by. Sorry. I still can't approve this.

Yeah, and what Rob said...



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 07:36 PM   #6 (permalink)

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)

Junior Member

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)'s Avatar

Posts: 16
Rep: 10
Age: 12
Sex:
Location: Traverse Town
Join Date: Mar 2007

Default

Ok I edited it out more.
(Could you please tell me a list of catagories that I should make for my character???)



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 07:42 PM   #7 (permalink)

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)

Junior Member

Sora V.S. Naruto(!!)'s Avatar

Posts: 16
Rep: 10
Age: 12
Sex:
Location: Traverse Town
Join Date: Mar 2007

Default

If that's not enough then I will work on it tomorrow (Our in the course of a couple week's.)



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 07:49 PM   #8 (permalink)

The Dude

I <3 Jak

The Dude's Avatar

Posts: 2,418
Rep: 10
Age: 21
Sex:
Location: Scranton. Where the Office is filmed
Join Date: Jan 2007

Send a message via MSN to The Dude
Default

by weaknesses, I think she means combat weaknesses. Not personal issues.



Top of Page
Old 03-23-2007, 08:00 PM   #9 (permalink)

Akira Avelon

Thy life for a dream

Akira Avelon's Avatar

Posts: 690
Rep: 12
Sex:
Location:
Join Date: Feb 2007

Default

Please read this thread. Kirby fo shizzle It outlines what we're looking for in a bio. You need more information on your character. Not just new things to add. Give a detailed background. As I said before, Look at other Bios. Like Mista Rob, Auron, Shakan'Dar, eXo or myself. They are well approved and if you want to go even further. read Travnia's bio. It's extremely complex and detailed.



Top of Page
Old 05-27-2007, 04:55 PM   #10 (permalink)

FullmetalDGinta

Member

FullmetalDGinta's Avatar

Posts: 40
Rep: 10
Age: 12
Sex:
Location: Traverse Town
Join Date: May 2007

Default

I used to be Sora V.S. naruto but i forgot my password



Top of Page
 


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Characters Jamie Biographies 17 07-07-2008 06:51 PM
CoM: Riku or Sora? Moony Kingdom Hearts Series 13 09-17-2007 06:06 PM
My Characters Rise Against Biographies 2 06-05-2007 03:49 PM
Characters Master F-U RP Archive 13 05-21-2007 09:31 PM
Allorhan's characters Allorhan Biographies 1 05-03-2007 12:27 PM

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.6.8
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.0.0