Characters

[Master F-U]

Name: Kane
Age: Kane kept his form of the age of 15 but is really older then time itself.
Gender: Male
Class: Axeman(lol)
Race: White/Dragon(in a human body)
Weight: 156 pounds

Apperance: Dark jet black hair down to his neck, about 5'11, totally black eyes, dark black hoody with the sleeves cut all the way up and a long green sleeved shirt under that. With a lip ring and slightly tight black jeans sagging down a little.

Armor: His armor is his wings they block off all attacks(depending on how strong)and can defend against magic. But once those wings are drained from the form Fury his axes' takes that power, but still can't take as much as the wings can. Other then that there is no other defense.

Spells: Kane doesn't use magic he uses magic combined with the attack of his axe/axes'. His attacks are: Swirling Clones, where he throughs the axe and the clones at his opponent, The Ripper, he takes his axe out and slashes back and forth at his opponent, and when his wings are all drained his attack he uses is called Destruction Ruins, he lifts his axe and slams it into the ground summoning death on him and using all his power on his opponent.

Weapon: Kane uses an Axe called Ira, this weapon can be powered up by his four wings which embody the six elements wrath, holy, sun, and aqua. When one wing is destroyed he drains his power from the next wing in line to power his weapon(they can only be used once each in battle). When angry enough he will use all his wings to create a whole new weapon which will give him another weapon called Fury(the form is also called Fury, where he puts all his wing power into both axes') . Once he does this his wings die away and he has no way of defense leaving him open for any hit that he can't block with his axes'.

Personality: Kane is the type of person who will only speak while out of battle, but when in battle he is silent and he never wishes to let his opponent live. When there is life he wants death and where there is joy he wants sadness, and he will go far out of his way to make anyones life miserable. Now if someones life was to be miserable and painful, he would leave alone.

Bio: Kane was sent down specially as a boy to destroy, once and for all, the dark god of the earth. But since the dark god didn't want him to remember his true power he washed his memory away, leaving him with his family. Kane was adopted and always believed he was a regular child. When the gods realized they did not want Kane's life to go that way they sent down another child to Kane's mom, named Terea. Once the dark god of earth realized this he took terea and put terea in his place, and since the light gods realized this they gave kane special abilities and powers(only a few of his once god powers) to once and for all destroy him. After a VERY long journey of fighting and death, Kane reached his destination at Terea's realm. Once they met, Terea told him of his true past and kane joined his side and they both defeated Kane's friends. After that battle kane destroys terea and swallows his soul.

Now kane searches for ways to find the gods, out of anger he wants to find them but will never meet them. Instead he stays on the earth only living of anger with no allies to help him and no family he wishes death on all and wonders the earth wishing to one day destroy the ones who created him.

[Akira Avelon]

Not approved. The characters are far too over powered it hurts... I see no weaknesses at all. I honestly can't see this character in any rp.. It'd just kill off any character that came in.. Sorry, Master F-U.

[Master F-U]

How about now, look in the personality section...

[Trav]

Not approved,

Lack of detail
Too powerful
Incoherent
Too short

Get these areas fixed and it'll be approved.

[Master F-U]

theres lots of details I unpowerfulled...or whatever...him!! There is a LOT of detail. Incoherent??? Too Short???

[Trav]

Read these bios and then look at yours.

http://forums.ffextreme.com/biograph...-universe.html - Travnia
http://forums.ffextreme.com/biograph...ollection.html - eXo
http://forums.ffextreme.com/biograph...raphies-e.html - .e

That's detail, they are structured well and each one of them can be KILLED. The way you have your bio so far trespasses on the god-modding, with its continuing power-ups and multiple lives.

[Master F-U]

Well theres been sever editing to this and now you can disapprove again...because there is NO WAY I'm doing what those others did.

[Akira Avelon]

Flaming not allowed or tolerated in the rp section. Plus the bio is still bridging on god modding.

[Trav]

Originally Posted by Master F-U

Well theres been sever editing to this and now you can disapprove again...because there is NO WAY I'm doing what those others did.

Fine with me, you ain't using that character though until either I or Aki approve it and that just ain't gonna happen until you produce something far better.

[eXo]

Originally Posted by Master F-U

Well theres been sever editing to this and now you can disapprove again...because there is NO WAY I'm doing what those others did.

F-U, it stands that "those others" are approved biographies, and that following their examples might not be such a bad idea to get your way.

[Master F-U]

sry I wasn't trying to flame though.

[Master F-U]

Is it better now.

[Master F-U]

(triple posting) is it better NOW.

[Akira Avelon]

Approved.