I wrote this poem back in 7th grade and it was quite a piece of literary work that my teacher asked if he could borrow it show his colleagues. He never returned it though...that twat. All I know is the title which is also a repeating line in the poem. So I'm going to be like Coleridge and recreate this poem long forgotten. Except I'm not on opium.

Vagrant avion sky high,
coarse grains of solitude,
silky lunar threads untwine.
Wind, Sand and Stars...

Attracted to the flows
and vagaries of the mist
that permeates softly nearby
of sorrow and renewal.

Reflection upon the dusk
of the vanishing light
goes ever so slightly,
so quietly and gently.

Voyage across the dunes
in trance for paradise
amongst the hardened sky
of subtle silent messages.

Vagrant avion sky high,
coarse grains of solitude,
silky lunar threads untwine.
Wind, Sand and Stars...

It's pretty nice. I can't believe you wrote this in 7th grade though, I couldn't come up with something like this now. You use good detail and basing it on a desert was a nice idea.

Originally Posted by Exodus It's pretty nice. I can't believe you wrote this in 7th grade though, I couldn't come up with something like this now. You use good detail and basing it on a desert was a nice idea.

I'm pretty sure the original one wasn't as good as this. Though I knew it was longer though. : / Thanks anyways but it's basically a new poem I based on the title of one I made back then. I got my title from a novel called "Le Petit Prince".